A SPACE FOR CREATING
So... many people who play a big role in my universe—-“my” univers? Really? That’s probably overstating my cosmic powers a bit.... Okay let’s just say a lot of the people I strive to stay connected with have creative tendencies. Understanding the richness this brings. To my experiences, it seems reasonable to connect creative experimentation to seeking peace and joy. Therefore, it shouldn’t come as a shock that my reading list includes a fair share of works offered by artists, actors, musicians, and writers willing to take a stab at expressing the processes and practices they have semi-adopated and adapted. Having gone down the on-ramp this far you may not be mildly befuddled by the fact that this post connects to one of these recent offerings. In this case it’s the book about writing one song by Jeff Tweedy the driving force within WILCO. (I’m not as impressed with WILCO as some, however, I once owned ABBA’s disco-oriented album
Okay if you create things, especially those things including words...I highly recommend his short book and for my money his explanation of a songwriting processes is fruitful. Therefore I’m going. To use it for a few posts to fill up some creative space.
One facet of the process outlined in the book is a word connection exercise. Tweedy gives an example of how some words get tied to some others and those connections need to be broken so that the words involved can become more dynamic. He essentially asks if there is a “smattering” of anything other than applause? So...I’m sure many of you thought sure there’s a smattering of penguins right? Ok..moving on he suggests that one might take an occupation and writing down ten verbs related to what tat person might do and then picking out ten or so nouns by looking around in your current space.
I won’t offer my full lists here, yet I will say the rest of this effort has to do with the occupations of cook and priest and the objects were drawn from my living room and my office/studio.
Verbs related to the cook
Frying broiling slicing
Frosting stirring scooping
Tasting boiling
Nouns linked to my living room
Light switch thermostat snow globe
Remote control foot stool sweat shirt phone charger shot glasses
Cast iron toy car
Now one can use these words by connecting them in various ways to form a poem of sorts and here’s mine.
As I activate the light switch with some degree of hesitance
It shows the snow globe’s boing and we’re all unwitting residence
We stand upon the foot stool on life’s cake we are the frosting
While our souls may be emerging we have no idea what it’s costing
There is sufficient. Evidence we know. Not what to do
With this abandoned phone charger dangling just outside the stew
So we maximize the headphones to cover up the crying
As we slowly realize our remote control is frying
The cosmic thermostat indicates that cold hearts may need scooping
So let’s raise our spiritual shot glasses and get to the regrouping
Verbs. Linked to a priest
Preaches kneeling or kneels pray
Blessed or blessing anoint sprinkle
Gather forgive comfort
Nouns in my office/studio
IPad/tablet/keyboard ink pen junk mail
Vinyl records guitar weed eater battery
Attic door
Microphone neon sign plastic flowers
curtains bunny chord stapler
Okay here we go again...
As the cleric tried to bless the fool
Who plays guitar in the vestibule
The microphone takes the stand
To testify this all was planned
By the peddler selling plastic flowers
And claims that they have mystic powers
To forgive those who abuse the pen
Or the tablet keyboard now and then
Outside we gather kneel and pray
Till the sprinkler send a stream our way
And the neighbor’s pet baboon breaks loose
And our weed eater runs out of juice
But the jester preached It will all be fine
Because it says so on his neon sign
That rests beneath the attic door
that’s held by bunny chords galore
But some of us are not so certain
For we’ve seen the man behind the curtain
And since we’ve heard the vinyl records play
We’ll seek peace and joy come what may
What do these rhymes mean? Who knows... but they are seeds and if you expect shade you might want to teach. Someone. How to plant trees and thank those who taught you. so thanks. To all you creative soldiers out there.
I loved the poem in this post! I'm on hold to read, How to Write One Song. Thanks, Jim!
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